My draft

Smack my head went skating across the deck. Jessie went over the side of the boat.I felt uncouns when i cracked my sculp open. sundenly two days later i wash up on the shore. I run arund the island looking for shatta.                                                                                                                                   


I felt cold and i looked at my clothes my T-shrit was soaked and my pants were shredded and ripped. Then i here sounds coming from the bushes. I see small red eyes and a fluffy tail. Its is crossed between a loin a eagle and a rattle snake. I was terrified so i ran across the sizzling bruning sand then at a flash of my eyes i see Jessie with a spaer. He tried to hold off the monsteris loin well i run to the nersted tree.
Now Jessie spots a sliver back and thats when jessie has a idea. He said to wait to night time. 4:hours later me and Jessie try to make a raft. Jessie tells me to go in to the jugle to get wood. So i did  and i starting to here noise. so i run faster and faster and i found the wood and sprint back to jessie and then we make the raft and get out of here. By:Harley toki